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Open Poetry #21

You And Me

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-07 02:47 PM

You And Me

you make
me need
heart planted
is seed
you water
my want
flooding me
so nonchalant
raining out
tiptoeing waves
wet drawn
drying crave
affections of
aches desire
you now
I require

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2002-07-07 02:53 PM

I really like this. It is very good.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-07-07 03:17 PM

All I can say is awesome.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-07-07 03:20 PM

(sigh) Oh Helen, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may you and your love forever be together and share true joy always! (smiles) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2002-07-07 04:19 PM

Helen,
Nice write, enjoyed the read.

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