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paladin

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since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

0 posted 2002-07-07 12:10 PM

Folding paper squares
Swans and flowers with her hands
Mommy makes magic

paladin

[This message has been edited by paladin (07-07-2002 12:24 PM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-07 12:23 PM

a child coos delights
mother's hand brings her magic
childhood is transformed

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

2 posted 2002-07-07 01:43 PM

A senryu in answer to my senryu.Thats cool Sunshine.Glad you liked it.

paladin

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2002-07-07 02:04 PM

Nice observation!..i can't do origami though..my hands stubbornly refuse to listen to my commands..

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

4 posted 2002-07-07 02:27 PM

Can ya make a frog? Cool write.

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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-07-07 02:32 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I love origami and you fold such grace with your fingertips here! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2002-07-07 02:36 PM

Cool write Bob. I'm married to a wizard who does origami..
Love this!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-07-07 04:20 PM

Yes I've seen some beautiful ones...swans are popular...James

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-07-07 05:07 PM

I've never tried origami...but the poem is excellent, Paladin.

~ paper hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

9 posted 2002-07-07 05:11 PM

Paladin...Very lovely images in this origami (senryu) poem. Enjoyed very much ***Ivy Rose

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