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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2002-07-07 07:45 AM

My Protected Heart

Knowing of a wary space
knowing where to reside
where I can safely place
the feelings that I hide

Coming to my home
sweet home
unlocked with golden key
nevermore to roam
dry loam
my asylum is safe, you see

Nevermore to fear the dark
or rest with unquiet thoughts
evermore to feel sweet love
loving my sanctuary sought

You are welcome
here within
you, here in my home
with me
sweetened height of pure
delight
because you alone
hold the key

Never do we think
to ever love again
even though at life we wink
but never touch again

Never knowing miracles
can come within a blink
so we remain impervious
until we start to think

A revelation can thus come
in the smile or word of one
and thus why you are here with me
for you alone have held the key

For you know of a wary space
and you know where to reside
where you can safely place
the feelings that you hide

Here, in the protected heart of me

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

1 posted 2002-07-07 08:11 AM

Sounds like a place where a boy could rest in peace. Enjoyed.

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

2 posted 2002-07-07 08:56 AM

I love the flow of lines in this poem... and the magic of the words!

Neeraja

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-07-07 09:11 AM

Enjoyed the morning read..
Lovely, perfectly lovely, dear Lady.
~Hugs~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2002-07-07 10:04 AM

Friendship's heart....where one is for one
and both are for both...where all can be
said, felt and shared...without fear...

Nicely done LIW....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-07-07 10:13 AM

Lady In White
A beautiful and lovely write, enjoyed.

Bridget Shenachie
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since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

6 posted 2002-07-07 10:41 AM

Beautifully soothing Sunday morning read... enjoying with a cup of tea...

Shenachie

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-07-07 03:10 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, I love the enveloping feel of your words here! (kiss on cheek) May your heart always be protected and touched with true love, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

8 posted 2002-07-07 03:25 PM

Lady in White...this is so very beautiful.
It feels like safety to me.

~ hugs from the heart

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2002-07-07 04:23 PM

Like the way you did this...its good to protect your heart...James

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

10 posted 2002-07-07 04:25 PM

Beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

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