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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-07 04:40 AM



Breathing

you are
so different
when you
are adored
doors just
fly open
that once
were ignored
stumbling first
then walked
now I run
someone adores
me
my breath
has begun


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2002-07-07 04:44 AM


Love this one!!  You just captured a subject that has gone unnoticed until now...breathing!  So vital to our very souls, but taking on so many different methods. Great, great job!! My compliments!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-07-2002 04:45 AM).]

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-07 01:10 PM


I see some things never change. Lovely Helen.

Kris

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Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-07-07 08:24 PM



You wrote "adore" so well...

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-07-07 08:28 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I too love how you express the meaning of the word in this, sweet friend, to advance, to feel free, to float! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light awlays shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tracey
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5 posted 2002-07-07 09:45 PM


Love the meaning in this one. How true it is.
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