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ctowen
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0 posted 2002-07-07 03:13 AM


In what sounds of known silence
   is where life can be heard
   Crickets tuning rains prayer
   as bullfrogs bellow air ...
   this, nature sets to word

In what sounds of loud violence
   thunder storms evening skies
   Shadows pass, formed in clouds
   visions of lightning shrouds ...
   patience, for the night cries

In what sounds of coming rain
   this silence flows in song
   Each note driven by thirst
   amongst hidden cloudburst...
   time short, the want so long

In what sounds of passions pain
   all that is missing is you
   The music of my heart
   that brings each sound to art ...
   in this night's tears of blue


create an addiction .... share a smile!!

© Copyright 2002 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-07 04:22 AM


I have known these tears, and I am loving this poem.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2002-07-07 04:26 AM



Tears of Blue, mingled with the sounds that fill the night.  Yes, I understand this one perfectly......wonderfully written!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


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3 posted 2002-07-07 10:44 AM


In what sounds of passions pain
   all that is missing is you
   The music of my heart''




you have the touch of gold....love this somewhat sad song, but beautifully done....


HUGSSSSSSS


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Sunshine
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4 posted 2002-07-07 11:56 AM



A very nice write, Sir...very nice!

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5 posted 2002-07-07 02:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Craig, this is soooooo beautifully sad, sweet friend, I know these tears so well because while I'm happy knowing Joanna and loving her so very much, I also get scared I may lose her and I can't let that happen! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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