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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm waiting for your safe return to see the smile deep in your eyes waiting for the tides to change so we can talk a little while I'm waiting for the pain to go to somehow ease your troubled mind I'm at the gate, can't pass you know and so I wait here for a sign The winds, they whimper in my ear the skies they've seen the torrent rain the sun has long since disappeared shunned by you, it shines in vain a raven rests upon my shoulder eyes so wise, I have to see I shall wait until it's over this ache that takes you 'way from me at the gates, I wait for you fingers locked around cold bars tormented by your tears and sighs I long to be there where you are I'm waiting for your safe return one smile to quench this burning thirst one look within in your deep dark eyes to herald the leaving of this curse I miss you... ~Tier 7/02 "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: You bring life to the ache... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
The winds, they whimper in my ear the skies they've seen the torrent rain the sun has long since disappeared shunned by you, it shines in vain Let somebody block my sun once...wouldn't recommend it...lol. This is a different style than I expect from you, I like it. Forgetting all I'm lacking |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine, I hope that's not an entirely bad thing... *smiles* Duncan, sometimes it's good to take a break from the norm...  Thank you both! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
The winds, they whimper in my ear the skies they've seen the torrent rain the sun has long since disappeared shunned by you, it shines in vain Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  ~ hugs of admirationLyra |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
A wonderful poem, T. Thank you.... Here's hopin' we run into each other on th' net soon. Mikey These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn Tier, Do you post your best stuff in "Open"? This is (and I risk my manly "rep" here) touching me in my sad and poignant place. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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