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Morcastlin
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0 posted 2002-07-06 08:21 PM


Love is quite the strangest feeling
Reason's notions ebb and flow
Tender touches send you reeling
Love is quite the strangest feeling
Yet, as if a thief that's stealing
Mental oceans cease or slow
Love is quite the strangest feeling
Reason's notions ebb and flow.

*Tweaked because I used my own meter. Not sure if there is a standard for the form.

Love,
Bonnie

"I want to Live! Life is a banquet and most poor bastards are starving to death!" -Auntie Mame

© Copyright 2002 Bonnie B. Hayes - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-06 09:32 PM


No matter the standard..I still like it!

Kris

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2 posted 2002-07-06 10:33 PM



Leaves a tingling... I like, I Like!

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3 posted 2002-07-06 11:28 PM


Oh, I like this one. Triolets are nice, and this one is excellent. I don't think there's any rule about meter.

Nan

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4 posted 2002-07-06 11:36 PM


A beautiful sweep! Nicely done. ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2002-07-07 05:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Bonnie, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too don't care about meter much and I love this gorgeous gem you've crafted! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, Yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bonnie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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