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Stryder
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2002-07-06 11:33 AM


A Secret Place

There is a secret place where I go
Where a luminous light encircles me
Free from the fear and the pain
Everything is pseudo; reaching out to me

My suppressed mind
Inaugurates me through time
To rejoin my past once again
And remember myself back then

I enter an précis state of mind
Ultimately leaving the world behind
Forget about reality; forget about time
Watch my entire life unwind

A place to rewind; a place to reflect
Watch my life playback, and intersect
My conscience escapes me
As I watch my past come into affect

There is a secret place where I go
To forget about the pressures of life
Shut the doors on time...
And open up my mind

-Stryder

© Copyright 2002 Stryder - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-07-06 11:39 AM



Stryder, you may open your mind here, any time...I don't recall welcoming you before, so Welcome to Passions....

you're going to like it here!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.


Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-06 11:52 AM


Stryder, first of all, WELCOME to Passions!! It's good to have you here.
Now, I like your post a lot!! Keep em' comin!

Krishankins

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3 posted 2002-07-07 05:03 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh Stryder, I am so happy to read your wonderful words again, sweet friend, I remember your fabulous debut in Spiritual and I know as long as you always follow your heart you will always hold much joy in your secret place of introspection! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stryder, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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4 posted 2002-07-07 05:17 PM


Stryder...Excellent poem!!!!  Great expression and deep thoughts. ***Ivy Rose
1slick_lady
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5 posted 2002-07-07 05:23 PM


welcome to passions...put your feet up...relax...unwind...you're among friends...you will like it here...great post...helen
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