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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-06 08:29 AM



Your touch

so far away now

memories

forever printed

in my heart

together

with an aching desire

waiting

for the day

we'll meet again....


© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-06 08:34 AM



Miracles DO happen....

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-07-06 08:41 AM


Neeraja
Very good, enjoyed. It's all applepie.

Muys
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3 posted 2002-07-06 10:52 AM


waiting for the day
we'íll meet again
I hope so
muys

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-07-07 12:00 PM


Agreement here with Karilea.
Miracles do happen, Neeraja

I loved your poem.

~ miracle hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-07-07 12:01 PM


Love passion and hope....


Lauren~

The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket
I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2002-07-08 03:45 AM


take it from one who felt that same way, my friend...if you have the longing, and it is strong, you can make it happen!  Loved this one!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    


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7 posted 2002-07-09 04:06 AM


I loved this piece. I hope your dreams and desires do come true, my friend.

~Titus

As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together.

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2002-07-09 06:02 AM



Neeraja-
Beautifully penned thoughts.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2002-07-09 05:13 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, how could I miss this one? This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know with all my heart you will find your loves touch and you will have true happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) I am becoming a huge fan of your work, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-07-09 06:05 PM


enjoy
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11 posted 2002-07-09 06:20 PM


This one proves that the short ones can ache the most.

Nan

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12 posted 2002-07-09 08:13 PM


...Beautiful...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2002-07-09 08:17 PM


very touching and sincere penning from your gift of words.  Lovely...*s*

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Neeraja
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14 posted 2002-07-12 01:23 PM


Thanks!  Thanks!! Thanks!!! for all your support!!!

Neeraja

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2002-07-14 05:56 PM


May that day and his touch visit you soon...James
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