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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-07-06 07:37 AM



Without Words

I welcome the cool of morn
as it fans itself over my body,
chilling the heat from dreams
that drenched me awake.

You came to me, without words,
lips telling secrets touching off
a new rhythm to my heartdance,
leaving me breathless and out of step.

For you are my weakness, and
bleed me blue when I condemn myself
to only you, cradled in whispers of mine
to share a sleepless night.

I sense your every thought,
the desires of the moment in untitled feel.
When I am with you, I have found my place,
no more false starts.

And in the frame of time, you are my
morning comfort allowing me to surrender
to a journey, a pictured togetherness,
powered by a knowing, without words.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
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1 posted 2002-07-06 08:15 AM


Beautiful... without words!

Neeraja

Temptress
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Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
2 posted 2002-07-06 02:52 PM


Yep..I know this feeling
and I also didn't get any rest last night. I was awake until 8am or so I think.
*sigh*
loved this, Lady.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
Posts 972
Texas
3 posted 2002-07-06 05:38 PM


NNIIIIIIIICE!!!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2002-07-06 06:23 PM


So beautiful. Good dreams, hm?
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2002-07-06 06:28 PM


Maureen,
A very nice write and I enjoyed the read.

JP
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since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343
Loomis, CA
6 posted 2002-07-06 07:35 PM


Absolutely beautiful

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
Nil Desperandum, Fata viem invenient

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2002-07-06 07:52 PM


Hello Maureen

This was so very beautiful.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2002-07-06 08:16 PM


Very very nice Maureen...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
9 posted 2002-07-06 09:22 PM


Much can be said without words...
A beautifully written poem, Maureen.
I hope you are doing well...

~ hugs without words

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2002-07-10 03:40 AM


glad I came back here in the last pages...I knew I'd find a good one from you there.

bumpity bump

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 774
IN
11 posted 2002-07-10 10:28 AM


Sometimes, words can't begin to express the true meaning of what the heart bleeds...very well done GF~ ((hugs))
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
12 posted 2002-07-10 10:56 AM


Neeraja..thank you for your words and reading me. *s

Temptress ...it's nice to see you here..glad you enjoyed this and  the feelings..well it would be nice to sleep a whole night through for once.
hugs
M

Krishankins...hm thannnnnnnnkkssss

Sandra...sometimes the dreams  are wonderful and  you never wish for them to end. But real would be so much better. *s

Seymour...thank you for your support, always,
M

JP..thank you for your response, I appreciate it.



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