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blondegirl10101 Junior Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 16 |
I remember the emotion and power in your voice as you triumphantly said those three little words. You looked as surprised to have said them as i was to hear them. I know the words just slipped out, but i believe that deep down in your heart you want to be with me and give me your true, deep, devoted love. I realize that when we met weboth said that we were not looking for a relationship, but a relationship seems to have found us. i have been feeling a strange feeling that i have not had in a while, feelings that i have had locked away within the deepest depth of my heart for soo many years now. I do not want to push you into anything that you do not feel that you are ready for, i only want to make you happy. I want to show you that love can be a beautiful thing if you are brave anough tolet it inside of your heart. [This message has been edited by blondegirl10101 (07-06-2002 04:59 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is obviously a heart-felt plea--but forgive my confusion here. Do you mind if I ask if this is free verse poetry, or prose? With a lack of format, it's difficult to tell. (for ME, anyway) But I always enjoy a sincere outpouring from the heart. An honest glimpse within. Enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
blondegirl10101 You should get a prompt answer from this. Enjoyed the read. |
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