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EagleScorpion
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0 posted 2002-07-06 03:11 AM



this may be a little out of season. but i remembered this little ditty me and my brother made up when i was about 6 years old. this write goes to the same rhythym as the old song "Jingle Bells"
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Jingle Bells (the new version)

I was in my bed,
Sleeping on the go,
I heard a bump on the roof!
That couldn't have been snow!
Then some guy fell in,
He was really fat,
Yay its Santa Claus!
But now my bed is flat OHH

Santa Claus, Santa Claus, why are you so fat?
I was sleeping peacefully and now my bed is flat,
OHH Santa Claus, Santa Claus, how much do you weigh?
I'm glad I'm not a reindeer who has to pull your sleigh!

this is your life. good to the last drop. doesn't get any better than this.
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GOlDsparklESS
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1 posted 2002-07-06 01:50 PM


AGGHH  WHY are you so adorable??  akdjfijdfl;asdkfms
that's it

angelswing
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2 posted 2002-07-07 10:10 PM


He he he - sad thing is, I remember doing that when I was younger . classic little rhyme . Loved it .
L.of.L. Tom .
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3 posted 2002-07-08 01:06 AM


lol That is too cute
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