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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-07-06 01:21 AM



Seven foot man walks his toy poodle
friendly giant gets rusty to doodle;
would amobeas move at the speed of light
and roses bloom forth in the dark of night?
no, that cannot be with unrelated things...
laws that govern them, come to be
flaws of stubborn men, work on me
unrelated things, nature swings
back to its checks and balances
for all who know and fear progress
in the unrelated, unguided actors digress
relevant facts of cause and effect relate
man has the audacity to regress...dictate


stick to the point of a relevant article:
sure that physics defines the smallest particle?
what do quarks then have to do with strings
and how young mothers nuture lives they bring
no, that cannot be with urelated things...
laws that govern then influence me
flaws of stubborn men come to be
the unrelated things continue to shock
systems of checks and balances run amok..
havok in the once tame world of the unrelated, increases in momentum
the blade gets lower and lower..in the pit and the pendulum.


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-06-2002 01:23 AM).]

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EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2002-07-06 02:09 AM


mmm this is nice. like this one. yup. i like it. yea physics DEFINATELY cant define the smallest particle. what pretension to think so! im willing to bet you can NEVER define the smallest particle. wowzers
Temptress
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2 posted 2002-07-06 03:48 AM


giving this a lift..
enjoyed

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-07-06 08:32 AM


Hi Eagle,

and the physics thing is just representative of one many things we's like to define but can't 'relate' to for very long..until another theorem comes out way..Thanks for sharing..appreciated your write on the gasoline chum!

Temptress,

This one is really packed, if I can say so myself...thanks for sharing


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