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Night Song Senryu
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Night Song Senryu |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Night Song Senryu Surprise me, my love In gentle ways of delight Simple surrender Enfold me to you Heartstrings sound like violins Paganini smiles Orchestrate the night Our voices to blend twilight My love, surprise me  |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
My ex once said with all my faults at lest I was'nt boring. paladin |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, what a perfect way to end my day. This is absolutely beautiful! ~Hugs nite~ |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
Perfect for the end of the day! Lovely, thoughtful write. Loved the picture of the tree in dusk's light. That is pure Kansas. Shenachie |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
i have been surprised!! read this over a few million times. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Karilea- These are gorgeous! You write the most beautiful senryus of anyone I know. I love them.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ME TOO! ME TOO! Lovely, Lady!  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write, you sure do know how to recite the violin of the heartstrings! (sigh) This is a sweet symphony of words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is so very beautiful, Karilea...and the photo sets it off perfectly...  ~ summer hugsLyra [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (07-07-2002 04:13 PM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Sunshine...Excellent example of how Senryu should be written. GREAT WORK!!! ***Ivy Rose |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Beautiful! Nan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
3 beautiful senyrus to form a wonderful read that is both calming and romantic. Very happy I caught these. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
Very very lovely!! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
Very pretty and such good writing! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Every time I read your poetry, I am surprised!! I always come away from your writings with the gift of thoughts to keep me until I read you again!! May you always be full of surprises!!!!!!!  Open the door and let your adventure begin!!! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sunshine, can imagine other part of this one from that photo, enjoyed it all lady |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful Senryus, indeed Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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