Open Poetry #21 |
An Afternoon |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
An Afternoon I will make a bed of clover just for you and serve you wine in stemmed glasses of cobalt blue show you sweet shapes in clouds to erase past tragic blow bubbles from a wand filled with magic let sunlight bathe you in a summers day all wrapped in an afternoon where we can stay |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
a soft summer sound, Helen... very slick indeed.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
There is a massive ancient Oak in Audobon Park that keeps this memory for me... (Remember how Autumn in New Orleans feels? well, at least the first "cool front" anyway) That's how this made me feel. Thanks for the rememory. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A very nice afternoon you've painted here, Helen. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
What an invitation....Surely this would be a most pleasing day....Very nicely written. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
An afternoon delight! S Arthur |
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