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Open Poetry #21

Heartache

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-05 12:41 PM

Heartache

there is
a heartache
that blows
upon the wind
don’t know who
it’s floating to
undetermined of
where or when
at times it
has held you
kissed and called
you it’s own
then passes
straight through
revealing its on loan
its the evil kind
of loving selfishly
spreading pain
it has to share
one day finds you
breezing happily
next gone
and holds you there

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2002-07-05 01:03 AM

Helen,
Very well done. So much truth.

Show you care to those you love...today.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2002-07-05 11:54 PM

I think it caught a westerly wind and found me....I enjoyed this...

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2002-07-06 01:44 AM

Not me, I'm gonna outrun it!

Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2002-07-06 03:43 AM

*sigh*
Something I hope to have no more of..
enjoyed the poem

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

5 posted 2002-07-08 12:00 PM

I think it did a u-turn and came back on me for a second round...or is it the third???Either way, I love this one too!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2002-07-09 03:46 AM

1slick_lady-
I felt every word of this one.
You've expressed it well.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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