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Wishing On Stars ... Dreaming On Rainbows

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Marge Tindal
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Wishing On Stars ... Dreaming On Rainbows
Gentle Spirit & Marge Tindal

Held within the silence of the night
dreams are born under moonlights' glow
Hopes are wished upon distant star
Just one wish, could you please bestow?


Let me dance on Rainbow colors
across the Milky Way tonight
Awakening to a dream come true
on early morn of light~


Twirl me upon the winds of tomorrow
carry my dreams to distant galaxy
As I drift on eternity's moonbeams
allow my dreams to become reality~


Set me down in joyous surround
in the land where visions have no end
Let me know that I have found
peace in serenity's glen~


Upon a star I'm forever wishing
thoughts carried on celestial streams
Eternal dance 'cross kaleidoscopic hues
in search of rainbow's arc of dreams~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Somewhere in time~


1 posted 07-04-2002 09:02 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Well..I am absolutely speechless and have goosebumps.
You two have managed to pen the most beautiful duet I can remember!!
How wonderfully your stanzas flowed into one another...
creating the perfect duet.
Thank you for this fantastic addition to my library!
~Hugs, Nancy~
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2 posted 07-04-2002 09:06 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Margie girl, and GS how utterly utterly perfect is this, you know my penchant for rainbows you know that I love them utterly, and this is a beautiful rainbowed hued delight. The colours sparkling within this and gracing the page as only a beautiful penning of your two souls would.

Truly exquisite writing from both of you a beautiful rainbow dance or divine delight. I love it love it love it love it utterly utterly utterly love it

YOU do know I LOVE this don’t you? I didn’t want to be too subtle about it


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy
  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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3 posted 07-04-2002 09:09 PM       View Profile for mycafe   Email mycafe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mycafe

So breathtakingly beautiful...

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Martie
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You two just made magic together.

    
ethome
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5 posted 07-04-2002 09:47 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Wonderful write marge!
This line is just too much!!

Twirl me upon the winds of tomorrow"

As Janet would say....way cool!
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


6 posted 07-04-2002 10:13 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

This is so beautiful. And, the poem is perfect.
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7 posted 07-04-2002 10:22 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Marge:  Lovely and with an ethereal quality that is pure magic!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 07-04-2002 11:59 PM       View Profile for Larry C   Email Larry C   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Larry C's Home Page   View IP for Larry C

Donna & Marge,
I absolutely love this wonderful duet. I could use all the hope you have to offer. But I didn't know serenity had a glen. How long have you been holding out on us? Huh? I want more, please.

Show you care to those you love...today.

Joyce Johnson
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9 posted 07-05-2002 12:32 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

I don't know how you do it, but so glad you do.  Joyce
Sudhir Iyer
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10 posted 07-05-2002 04:01 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer

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My regards,
Sudhir
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11 posted 07-05-2002 04:46 AM       View Profile for Neeraja   Email Neeraja   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Neeraja

I enjoyed this poem so so much!!!  And the presentation is so beautiful!!!

Impressive!!!

Neeraja
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I love the gentle Spirit and the hope and promise this wondrous poem enfolds...Beautiful, Marge!

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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The Shores of Alone


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Very lovely poem, you write well together.
Sandra
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14 posted 07-05-2002 09:10 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit


Thanks to all of you.  
I remember one day when I was
feeling very low having made
a comment to Marge, and in reply
she said that it sounded like
a beautiful title for a poem.
A short while later I told her
I believed she was correct
and that I knew it would be even
better if it had the magic of her
words in it.  I was so right!!
Had she not wrote it with me,
it would never have come to be.

Marge gal, thank you,
not only for the pleasure
of writing with you,
for you making this so
very beautiful, but for brightening
my life with a smile that day....
and many days..
For that......I thank you.  


Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-05-2002 09:13 AM).]

Marge Tindal
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15 posted 07-05-2002 09:16 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Thanks everyone ....
I'm glad my little 'Co-Quill came in here to take a bow~
This little piece was a *gift* from her Gentle-Persuasion to pen it with her~

Donna ... I thank you for your beautiful thoughts~

Sudhir~
WONDERFUL !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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on the horizon of a fairytale


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what a wonderfully poetic team.....

lovely as always Marge. I've missed you.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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a well-deserved rainbow for each of you..

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18 posted 07-05-2002 11:27 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Annie thank you so much.  This was great to do.

Deer, and may we all find that pot of gold at the end of those rainbows.  Hugs.

Thanks again to all.  Peace to poetry land.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Marge Tindal
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19 posted 07-06-2002 04:19 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

AWhisper'sCaress~
AND I've missed you too, my friend~
Welcome HOME~

Balladeer~
Awwwwwwwww, you just 'knew' we'd love those, didn't ya'?

GentleSpirit~
This really was an experience for me ... and I thank you for your patience as I sorted out some happenings in the 'outside' world~
You're a lovely lady with lovely poetic thoughts~
Thanks for sharing~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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20 posted 07-06-2002 08:44 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Again, thanks and peace to poetry land.

Marge, I hope those outside world things all pass swiftly and you heal soon.  It was surely an experience that I will cherish
as is the gift of support you always offer.  Hugs to you precious lady.  
~D~

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

Madame Chipmunk
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21 posted 07-06-2002 08:58 PM       View Profile for Madame Chipmunk   Email Madame Chipmunk   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Madame Chipmunk's Home Page   View IP for Madame Chipmunk

You two make a terrific team...
thank you for the lovely show.

~ rainbows of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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22 posted 07-07-2002 01:03 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Wonderful indeed, I'll be looking forward to another from your pens.

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

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23 posted 07-07-2002 01:10 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Upon a star I'm forever wishing
thoughts carried on celestial streams
Eternal dance 'cross kaleidoscopic hues
in search of rainbow's arc of dreams


Marge sweetie, awesome poem...
I especially adore the closing verse...
Hugs2uDearFriend
*~coco~*
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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The two of you make a perfect poetic duet and I hope all the dreams for both of you come true, but please, when you are done with the stars and rainbows, could you put them back up for us.   
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