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inspiredpoetwriter
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0 posted 2002-07-04 07:54 PM


Title: Came In My Dreams

Last night you came in to my dreams
That smile still makes me very weak I cant help
But smile at you with those brown eyes
That give me a reason to love you as much as I do.

I blush from your sweet kind words
Bending down you say you miss me I look up
At you and say the same how I long for your warmth your touch
We share a laugh a moment so special something I’ll never
Truly for get.

Handing me a note, I open it up
It says you love me you always have and also
Again that you miss me very much and you
Want to by my man, to hold me, love me
Be there for me when I’m in need
Of a friend a lover.

© Ang “02”

¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥

© Copyright 2002 Care - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-04 08:06 PM


I like this post. I hope your dream comes true.


Krishankins

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2 posted 2002-07-04 08:22 PM



Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2002-07-04 10:22 PM


I enjoyed this sweet romantic write.

Nan

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4 posted 2002-07-04 10:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I too wish this happiness for you with all my heart, sweet friend, you are so deserving of it and you write of your dreams so beautifully! (kiss on cheek) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-07-05 01:26 AM


and that is the way it should be
I love this!

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Neeraja
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6 posted 2002-07-05 04:50 AM


Love can be so wonderful!!!  Sigh....
snowpants
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7 posted 2002-07-05 11:41 PM


'Last night you came in to my dreams
That smile still makes me very weak I cant help
But smile at you with those brown eyes
That give me a reason to love you as much as I do.'

Very nice write...love the expression of your inspiration...I really enjoyed it...

sp        

I've been down this road forever,
and the time has come to circle back home...

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