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devina
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0 posted 2002-07-04 06:21 PM


Read Me…

Read me
in a softened stance
Deem me
Fragility
of chance

Read me
in crest of wind
upon a breath
in selfless sin
Deem me
animation
of your dreams
in fairytale
of love so keen

Read me
in a line of sorrow
a happy smile of fate
a crisp winter morning
before it is too late
Deem me
your enchantress
on peaceful silent wing
keeper of your heartthrob
This silent song I sing…


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



© Copyright 2002 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-04 07:03 PM


Tanya, I love this poem. It is so subtle.
Innocent even. I don't mean to ruin your rep. But it is!!

Love 2 ya girl,
Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

mycafe
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2 posted 2002-07-04 09:16 PM


I so loved the emotions in here... You wrote so well, devina!

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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3 posted 2002-07-04 10:07 PM




(smiles) Oh Tanya, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous wods you write, this is very sincerely heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-05 03:37 PM


hey. . . just like always. . . I'm listening. . .

beautiful hon. . . just beautiful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

vandana
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5 posted 2002-07-05 04:29 PM


enjoyed
devina
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6 posted 2002-07-06 11:48 AM


Kris...Ooohh- tell me you didn't (dramatic sigh here) say the "I" word? I am ruined!!!??? LOL You know? Now I shall have to write a real devious one... Love ya sweets!!!

marie- I am so glad you enjoyed this...was a pnoder that I just had to get down (been doin that a lot lately)...ty lady!!!

Noah- thanks for peekin into a thought you!!!

John- and I know you just love this side I expose lately!!! thank you for the ear sweets...

vandana- thank you


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



BrandeeM
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7 posted 2002-07-06 11:54 AM


I enjoyed this softer side of you...

as always you still keep your poetry edge!!!

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