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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-07-04 01:59 PM


Light and Tea    June 29, 2002

Have a cup of tea,
Gazing at the reflection of my ring-
My own design, and adoration,
Now become a symbol in my life.
Now does the diamond take the rose place,
or does it enchant the air?
Now my love would have a remembrance of me...
The ring... which bright like my smile
Will glow on his face
When he needs light.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2002-07-04 04:19 PM


Nice thoughts.......He will have light from that.... Happy love to both of you.
Don't think it ever takes the rose's place entirely.
Very enjoyable!

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-07-04 05:06 PM


"Will glow on his face
when he needs light."
James

aries_luv_ppl
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3 posted 2002-07-04 05:14 PM


hehe... I think to him the remembrance would be one poem I written it for him printed with our banquet and picnic pictures on the top of the page. LOL. The ring is just a fantasy. I didn't buy him a ring.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2002-07-04 07:46 PM


Eliza~
Ahhhhh, the beauty of poetry is when you can write the ring .... and have us see it as though it was there~

Wonderful~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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mycafe
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5 posted 2002-07-04 09:13 PM


Eliza, this is very beautifully written!

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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6 posted 2002-07-04 10:26 PM




(smiles) Awwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words and know this sure will bring a smile of light to his face! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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