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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-04 11:38 AM



This is one of the first poems I wrote... and it tells how my artist and I "saw" each other for the first time... (we've met online) now we have a long distance relationship... We have spend 3 wonderful months together last summer... we are hoping we can be together soon.

WAITING FOR YOU.....

Could I ever know what I was waiting for
sitting on the highest dune
watching the ships pass by

Only feeling the cold within
the emptiness
and oh so many fears

Longing for I don't know what
the restlessness
little I knew about love

Alwyas searching everywhere
sometimes I thought I've found
to realize it couldn't fill the emptyness inside

Until one day... I saw a name on my computerscreen
"Artist In Waiting"
A name that touched my heart

What is he waiting for?
Does he feel the same as me?
Could he be searching too?

He only asked me:
"Where were you?
I was waiting for you..... "




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1 posted 2002-07-04 11:46 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I can completely relate to this for I have fallen in love with Joanna, who posts as RosePetal here, and we have known each other for 9 months and we may meet this month or next month, YAY!!! This is soooooooo wonderful, sweet friend, I sure hope you do meet soon, that would be a dream come true, I wish this happiness to come true for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-07-04 06:09 PM


"Where were you?
I was waiting for you."
Very nice...James

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-07-04 07:01 PM



As beautiful as the question "is it You?"

You continue to engage me with your poetry, Neeraja...thank you ever so much for joining Passions...

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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4 posted 2002-07-06 07:56 AM


Thank you Noah, James and Sunshine for your sweet words about my poem... it's very much appreciated!

Love,Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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5 posted 2002-12-31 03:21 AM


Hope it works out
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