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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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The Netherlands

0 posted 2002-07-04 08:03 AM




It doesn’t matter
how far I travel
in my dreams…

It doesn’t matter
how often
I call out your name
in the storm
of my emotions...

Sooner or later…
I have to wake up
to face the reality
of still being caught
in a wave of longing…
stranded
on the shores of time….





© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Kitty**
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Charlottesville,VA USA
1 posted 2002-07-04 08:10 AM


I can identify with this one...
Good job with expressing your feelings...

Kitty

If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-07-04 08:10 AM



Neeraja...

you do have a way of bringing
the feel home to the heart...

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
3 posted 2002-07-04 08:37 AM


Neeraja, this is a powerful read and one that was much enjoyed by me.

Look forward to more of your work.


In your dreams I am real, if only just for a moment
Your emotions with mine cry for escape from the heartbreak
In time we are both longing for love

Hope all your dreams come true.

Sincerely Rick

  

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-07-04 08:38 AM


Neeraja
Good write, enjoyed.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2002-07-04 08:40 AM


I can relate to this very well.
Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-07-04 11:22 AM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Neeraja, I can feel such yearning in your words, sweet friend, I understand how you feel but know that true love will come to you and is destined to always bless your life! (smiles) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
7 posted 2002-07-06 07:58 AM


My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem!  

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
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Michigan
8 posted 2002-07-07 12:22 PM


I love the truth of this, Neeraja

~ dreamy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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