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Butterfly Kisses |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Looking up to me She takes my hand In her eyes she sees An invincible man Why is it, for me I'm blessed with this gift My precious Josie Whose love doesn't drift As innocent and pure As soft fallen snow To the ends of the earth For her I would go It's important to me The smallest of things Like her butterfly kisses My heart they make sing I'm taken away Three thousand miles I'm sorry sweet Josie But it's just for a while If I had a choice And could be anywhere For your butterfly kisses You know I'd be there With you I love you most, Daddy A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground [This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-04-2002 04:20 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweet, and my heart aches with you, for your longing here, Kris....tch...hugs.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Doesn't seem fair but it will be alright in the end. You'll be butterfly kissed til ya can't breathe....I can just feel it in this yearning piece.....Lot's of love in this! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, Kris...there is a saying around here, if you are going to write tear-jerkers, you must give us a hanky alert... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kris, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is so touching! I hope you send this to her.  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I KNOW she is gonna love this one Kris...you ARE sending them to her, right?? Only one more week of waiting, yes? This brings to mind one of my favorite country songs...and I've always cried like a baby hearing it...Bob Carlisle I think?? Beautiful daddy!!! bigs hugs from me ~Tanya Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Kris, I can feel the ache is this piece. In time my friend....in time. ~Heart-Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Stapelton Junior Member
since 2002-04-16
Posts 13Canada |
really touching |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Kris This was such a beautiful, heartfelt piece of writing from a very proud father. Your love shines through each and every word. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Kris....makin me cry this mornin? such sweet words...I could not imagine how hard it must be for you.. wonderful poem |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Kris, such a yearneing, aching connected piece. I know all about those butterfly kisses but for me they are from my "Love you grandma -porridge hug?" grandchild. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a sweet loving poem..well expressed. *s M |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
thank you all!! I only have four days left and then I get to see her!!!!!!It's been a year, so I expect she'll have a lot of them for me. Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, I can feel such heartache in your words, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you, know that time will ease the hurt! (sad sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Kris...Great longing and revelation of a father's deep love for his daughter in this beautiful poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
stop making me cry!!!k...this is so sad...i'm so sorry the world is as it is...but she will make everything all better soon...with many butterfly kisses...helen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
This is very sweet. I read it to my daughter. I hope you have sent this to her. She will enjoy it. And I do believe you have attained your goal of trying to fit in as much emotion in a few lines. Good job. |
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