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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-07-03 09:05 PM



Who doesn’t cry on the Fourth of July
when Old Glory so proudly waves?
Whose heart doesn’t pound at the very sound
of ten guns at the warrior graves?
Do you feel a slight chill with hand over heart
as the Star Spangled Banner is played?
Does a tear trickle down your cheek
seeing Vets march in a parade?
Does the sight of a child clutching a flag
make you hopeful for the future of man
Do you feel pride in your birthright today
from whence this greatness began?
If you answered yes to all the above
if your country you will defend
then you are the greatest of patriots,
a true American, my friend.

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1 posted 2002-07-03 09:06 PM



Yes!

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2 posted 2002-07-03 09:06 PM


Nicely done!
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BRAVO!!! Oh Sharon, this is wonderful, sweet friend, this brought tears to my eyes reading this because I am so happy to be an American and I stand proudly to hope for the best even through the aftermath of 9/11! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, God Bless America, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2002-07-03 09:16 PM


Long may she wave
Well done, PdV

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5 posted 2002-07-08 01:12 AM


A great tribute to FREEDOM and AMERICAN PATRIOTISM at a much needed time. We should never take what we have in America for granted, for it could all be gone tomorrow.
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6 posted 2002-07-09 04:09 AM



Sharon-
Absolutely, YES!!!
Wonderful heartfelt write, my American friend!
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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