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I'm No Artist
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I'm No Artist |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
No one ever accused me of having any talent When it comes to drawing, I’m a joke You can stare all day at what I’ve painted And never decipher a single stroke I tried to draw today, in the spirit of liberty I wanted to draw a firecracker or maybe a roman candle But to me it looked like a butter churn laying on it's side with a vibrating handle  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are so funny! *shaking my head* here-- my dear, wonderful friend, I'll just bet that if you add a little sparkle to the wick, and give it the appearance of being "on fire it would not only look great graphically, but better express the personality of the author!  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This was written today after I left work. I had to mark myself off until Monday as I'm taking Friday off. So I wrote "Back Mon. 7/8" then I tried to draw a firecracker. I was giggling over it and the receptionist wanted to know what was so funny. I told her I'd been trying to draw a firecracker but it only looked like a butter churn laying on it's side with a vibrating handle.... that phrase stuck and as a challenge to myself, I thought I'd try to use it in a poem!!  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I just think this is marvelous, sweet friend, I think you are a terrific artist and should do more of these gems! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, let the fireworks explode tomorrow, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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cherrypoptart Member
since 2002-06-09
Posts 109state of wordthiness |
A real firecracker of a poem........sign back into work!! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Hey, at least it was a picture!? This was a very jovial write. I enjoyed. A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
A funny poem.... smile.... and isn't it that for most modern art...you first have to read the describtion to know what it is? I think you have a "modern" talent! Smile... Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine Looks pretty good to me. Enjoyed the write and humor. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I loved the presentation and the humor PDV. ENJOYED IT. Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful ... and you are a gem of an artist.. Regards, Sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and that's what a writer does. . . lol. . . love the pic. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sharon, I think you did just fine. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Better than my drawings, Sharon. Sandra |
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