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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Though it is the radiance existent only within your soul that will be guiding me through the paths of my journey to help me find my way By myself I have to reach a certain point in my life I just want you to know my beautiful shining star how much I'll be missing you throughout every single day This is a poem to remember so you will never forget how special you are in my eyes All I desire is to love you and honor our cherished memories but now the time has come to say our goodbyes Each day we are apart another of my tears will fall Each night when I dream your voice I'll hear in song Each time I open my arms your warmth will still surround me It is all I can do to wish that you had been there all along You are an angelic presence that will never fade and die I am hoping you will forgive me as I turn around and walk away God will be watching over you until the moment that I return I love you beyond imagination in your heart my destinies now lay Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paul, yes... write like this more often, please.... |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thanx Sunshine, I am glad you like it, I just hope more people read it. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Paul Your words were truly wonderful and I could feel the love and longing in each verse. I'll look forward to reading more of your work. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
I am thinking this would be a poem someone I know in person would send to me if they read. I enjoyed this despite its sadness. Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thanx Suetang, I have entered about 6 other poems here, you may have to go back a few pages to find them. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thanx TwoHeartsOnePen, I appreciate you taking the time to read and respond to my poetry. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
You write so beautifully, I want more!! enjoyed  mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh... ow. sigh. beautiful... but oh... (angst |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paul I like how you come full circle in this piece! Great writing! |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thank you mycafe, have you read the other ones I have posted? Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thank you Serenity, I am glad you enjoyed it. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
I appreciate your nice response ethome, I went on vacation a few weeks ago and had plenty of time to write a new poem, I am glad all of you enjoyed it. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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