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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14
Posts 164
Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-07-03 11:59 AM


graceful sensations

In beach chair blue I sit retreating from wake or care.
Caramel grains of sand sift between my toes of playful rest.
Clouds aloof drape themselves in the sun’s red.
Chilled Caribbean sea-breeze proves around my brown skin,
The voices of friends on it rides inquiringly into my ears.
Night whispers it’s presence with ever growing certainty,
As seagulls surrender and into it wistfully disappears yonder.
All inhaled & savored with each wave that makes love to the shore.
Ever so far, the sky’s bulbs twinkle brightly as if to say “Goodnight”,
This belly of celestial beauty bulges, exclaims the night.
I only sink deeper into it’s metamorphosis of graceful sensations.

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

© Copyright 2002 hayden a. james - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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1 posted 2002-07-03 12:03 PM


Nice imagery!!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-07-03 02:27 PM


Beautiful imagery.....wonderful scene you took me there.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-07-03 02:44 PM


Mmmm, wonderful imagery...
think I'll stay there just a while longer...
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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