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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2002-07-03 10:16 AM





So much can be said
between the lines
between the spoken word
with a hush
with a lick of the chops
and a drop of the lower jaw....
Slurp, gobble gobble,
gulp
slurp, gobble gobble
gulp.. yumm....
gulp... burp.

Some people have the tenacity
to say so much with so little:
slurp..chomp..gobble gobble..
glup...burp. Ahhh!
Other people have so little to say:
burp!

The key is to let most of it go...
in one ear
and out the other
without devastating
your mind in between.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (07-03-2002 10:19 AM).]

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mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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1 posted 2002-07-04 03:14 AM


This is hilarious...and cute too!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2002-07-04 04:36 AM


Very very noisy but very very RIGHT!
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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3 posted 2002-07-04 11:58 PM


I was in one of more playful moods, thanks cafe and ethome for sharing your thoughts


Temptress
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4 posted 2002-07-05 12:36 PM


interesting..I think it needs another round while I think about it.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

ecrivan
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5 posted 2002-07-05 08:59 AM


appreciate your help


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