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Neeraja
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0 posted 2002-07-03 07:54 AM



Last night before I went to sleep
I missed you oh so much...
Your voice... your eyes... but most of all
the magic of your touch

I closed my eyes and felt my tears
running down my face
on my cheeks and in my neck
leaving a salty trace

I can't recall what happened next
because before I knew
I found myself in your room
smiling down on you

You were sleeping peacefully
under deep blue sheets
And my heart was pounding
with fast and loving beats

I couldn't wait to touch your skin
with my fingertips
followed by a thousand kisses
from my loving lips

Oh mijn lief... don't wake up yet
leave to me this moment
Let me dwell a little longer
in your magic scent

I have waited far to long
to be with you like this
So just a few more seconds
before my wake up kiss

Let me dream this dream of us
together for one night
Let me sleep in your arms
while you hold me tight

I kiss your lips to wake you up
and whisper lot's of things
before we fly our flight of love
carried on passion's wings



© Copyright 2002 Neeraja Wittebrood - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-03 08:04 AM


Neeraja
It must be silk sheets, it's as smooth as silk. Enjoyed

Goodknight
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2 posted 2002-07-03 10:32 AM


powerful passion - sensual images - well written - I liked this poem lots - Paul
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3 posted 2002-07-03 11:49 AM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo sensually beautiful, sweet friend, I too wish this happiness for you always and your loving heart to forever happily fly on loves wings! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Muys
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since 2002-04-06
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4 posted 2002-07-03 12:14 PM


~~~~*Dear Neeraja*~~~
For me it is so easy to read your poem
I love it {ik vind hem heel mooi}
Muys

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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5 posted 2002-07-06 07:59 AM


My dear readers... thank you for your sweet words about my poem!  

Love, Light and Happiness!

Neeraja

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6 posted 2002-07-06 10:46 PM


...Oh mijn lief... don't wake up yet
leave to me this moment
Let me dwell a little longer
in your magic scent...

I do believe I see beauty all around...

Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-07-06 10:52 PM


Oh mijn lief... don't wake up yet
leave to me this moment
Let me dwell a little longer
in your magic scent

Oh what a delicious feeling, here...Neerja.
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem, and can't wait to read more of your work.

~ welcoming hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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