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The Island |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Island Each an Island unto oneself Wishing the world of dreamers bliss Dancing in wile a phantoms elf Waiting for eternities kiss. And we bloom just like a flower We raise our faces to the sun And make the best of every hour Until our last of time is done A garland thrown into vortex Each separate one a piece of rhyme Woven by the needle sex And placed upon the sands of time. Wherein each grain passes through A cylinder of daily wears Where eyes shine back the mirrors view And turns again to count the fares You have dialed the eternity wheel And will be charged without appeal. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, good morning! This is a very good start to the day. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Top of the morning to you my dear and a bright thank you.  |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
You have a great way in using words... I enjoyed reading this!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja And that's a great reply, thank you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A garland thrown into vortex Each separate one a piece of rhyme Woven by the needle sex And placed upon the sands of time. Wherein each grain passes through A cylinder of daily wears Where eyes shine back the mirrors view And turns again to count the fares You have dialed the eternity wheel And will be charged without appeal. ==================================== YOU ARE SO COOL!!!!! You say these come harder and harder for you...yet look at what you come up with!! A garland thrown into vortex Each separate one a piece of rhyme Where eyes shine back the mirrors view And turns again to count the fares You have dialed the eternity wheel And will be charged without appeal. Look at these lines... at the imagery...the metaphor and analogy...the wit and wisdom... the irony and the impact....those closing couplets are so clever and cool..SO CLASSIC YOU!! The whole theme of this is classic Sy-babers poetry...and as always rhyme divine. I do so love the way your poetic mind works...and though you will say differently...it WORKS damn fine...your pen proves it every time  *winkiewinkie*   We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And we bloom just like a flower We raise our faces to the sun And make the best of every hour Until our last of time is done' Sweet, sweet poet ... were I to be stranded on your Island of Poetic Thoughts ... I would NEVER attempt rescue !!  Love ya'  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, The top of the morn to you dear Tinkerbell. You must be having honey for breakfast, for some of it spilled over on me. Just imagine two roses for you. One from Randy and one from me. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You could stay as long as you like on my Island. We could fill the sky with misty morn poems. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Is your island anywhere near me?? Can I come too...please?? Excellent write Sy! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress My Island is as far as your mind. Have a happy. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and holder of the mornings light, magnifique, n’est ce pas? Tu ecrie cela lui tient a coeur. Padon mon cheri, j’ai palais Anglaise. This is very very close to my heart, this speaks to me, it speaks with the resonance of beauty and peace. This is awesome You write and the world stands still to listen, wonderful writing, fabulous metaphor and stunning imagery again YOU darling heart shine bright. I love it utterly utterly utterly. I’ve been off chasing rainbows and painting butterfly wings, but I’ve returned to my natural home and here you are with a positive dream of delight. I can always rely on your words to speak to my heart, they always do and in such a clear and perfectly beautiful voice too. Thank you for this wonderful dish of dream. (See you tomorrow Seymour darling boy, I might be late but at least when I arrive I bring smiles with me) As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, ok, so I wasn't here to greet your morning, but I am here now, to say, good evening, Sy...thanks for the read! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) WOW!!! I love this, sweet friend, may your love and you forever dial into eternity forever and never hang up deep in each others hearts! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is great stuff Sy.... love it all! "You have dialed the eternity wheel And will be charged without appeal." You sure you're not starting a new call-up religion??? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Glad your back and you brought a smile to my face. Sunshine, ethome, Funny, enjoyed your comment. Noah, Always enjoy your replies. |
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