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adagio evening |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio and mistress moon is breath sound pizzicato am I but monophone of wind in passion then when we pant step fast the wicked allegros like the parchment penned hymnals of loki when we seam our percussion chorus bolero and the hurdy gurdy man grinds his finger pens as you in lute wield gown violate nights baritone and spend tenor whims to croon a psalmist spin are we duets of warble mouth staccato blend chivvy crying to ululate our cain of raising bend in concert struck varitate of curtain lifter's sin or but fetch of song to eyes of watchless whim ©Dark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-03-2002 08:53 AM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ha! I love it! Good key too! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
when night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio and mistress moon is breath sound pizzicato am I but monophone of wind in passion then when we pant step fast the wicked allegros like the parchment penned hymnals of loki when we seam our percussion chorus bolero ============================ as you in lute wield gown violate nights baritone are we duets of warble mouth staccato blend chivvy crying to ululate our cain of raising bend in concert struck varitate of curtain lifter's sin ================================== You are just too cool for school.. youve penned a chorus of creshendo, this is sooooo sinfully sensually wonderful the vocab and subtle rhyme is poetically sublime. very cool write DS..but then me thinks you couldnt write any other way  We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
et, thanks friend for the review and wave. janet marie humble buckets of huggy thanks...still dinkin with stuff (grin) goes with the smoke, thanks ms pleasure |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
a symphony of images and feelings touchingly sensual - thanks for a great poem - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger A whim is a whim and not a sin. Enjoyed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes silence speaks very loud... I am being very silent... Excellent write... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooohhhhhh...I love the quirkiness of this write, sweet friend, I just love your use of powerful vocabulary and imagery, I do know many words but truly you teach me many too! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Paul, thanks sir for the kind words, glad you enjoyed this. sy, thanks amigo, was fun to play with music a bit Sunshine, good morning ms coffee lady friend, thank you for stopping by to listen noah, hi guy, glad there are words that are useful in my humble hangings Enchantress, I love that word...dang is so cool thanks babe |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Andante~ rapidement je cours en votre musique du soleil. While night is hanging moon sheets out to dry.. Me.. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina soyez la lune pour moi alors laissez-moi être votre chanson de ciel ( i promise not to sing ) thanks for the vison of song babe [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (07-03-2002 12:36 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS If you sing, I'll listen. You are an orchestra! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, you don't want me to sing unless you like the sounds of a cat caught in a door and finger nails on blackboards with reverb..thanks hon |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"When night strums her breasts in slow eye adagio" Man, this is the coolest of cool...you express life like no other. I love your unique charisma. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Wonderful song you sing DS. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mel' thaks lady friend for your sweet touch sigh's a pleasure to have your touch, thank you so much |
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