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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-03 04:31 AM



Puddles


what is it
i can say to you
i have said
so much
and yet
nothing at all
i have so much
to tell you
to share
all in letters said
can i say
you are the rain
gentle and loving
on my skin
enriching and washing
me clean
making my clothes
cling to me
exposing me
underneath
pouring emotions
till i run
and melt
me in puddles



© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2002-07-03 04:59 AM


great images here, I remember a time like that.
ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-07-03 05:13 AM


you are the rain
gentle and loving
on my skin
enriching and washing
me clean


I really like the above lines!

Good write!

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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3 posted 2002-07-03 08:02 AM


I love the way you composed those words...
Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-07-06 11:28 PM


WHEW! I need some rain here to cool me off! Can you pour a drop or two on me?
Nice one!

Krish

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-07-07 01:10 AM


Helen,
Sounds like a Kodak moment to me!

Show you care to those you love...today.

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2002-07-07 05:46 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a refreshing and touching poem raining with desire! (kiss on cheek) This is a true keeper, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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