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Open Poetry #21
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my3monkeytoes
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since 2002-05-11
Posts 152
In the Carolina Breeze
0 posted 2002-07-03 12:20 PM


                      *
                      **
                      ***
                      ****
                      Gently
                      blows a
                      southerly
                      wind, try~
                      ing to drift
                      our souls to-
                      gether again ~
                      Rocked ever so
                      by nature's moon
                      wave, I cannot de-
                      ny that it's you  I
                      so crave.  Sail with
                      me please
                      to
                      a
    height unsurpassed by those who love weakly
     and those who love last. We'll steer thru
        the storms and relax o'er the wails.
           We'll drift into destiny, with
               God's breath
                 upon our
                   sails.  
© Copyright 2002 Sydney McLean - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455
1 posted 2002-07-03 12:25 PM

Wow!  This is so cool!  Not usually big on shape poems but this was very different.  Love the poem, love the shape!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2002-07-03 12:25 PM

WOW oh WOW very impressive....both poem and "art"  


Lauren~

Emeralds from mountains
thrust towards the sky
Never revealing their depth
ecrivan
Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
3 posted 2002-07-03 01:21 AM

cool write and image


Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
4 posted 2002-07-03 06:42 AM

loved the content and the display.  very true words, well written.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}
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