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jge84
Junior Member

since 2002-06-27

Posts 10
IL USA

0 posted 2002-07-02 09:56 PM

I have no mouth,
And I must scream.
I must be lost in
A terrible dream.

I have no clue
What to make of this.
Just last year
I was in bliss.

I feel like my heart,
Has been ripped right out.
And about all of it,
I still have doubt.

If you want to make an apple pie from scratch, you must first create the universe.

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

1 posted 2002-07-02 10:09 PM

I have nothing bad to say about this poem.
I really do love it.
I've felt that way a few times ... well more than a few.
Not that I seriously didn't have a mouth, of course! (Which I don't think you meant literally)
But when I needed to scream and yell, but I couldn't... ya know? Maybe?

Keep it up, and great job.

To want you back,
would to be an empty ocean; a wasteland.

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

2 posted 2002-07-02 11:43 PM

Great description of the silent scream of anguish--whatever the cause. Keep writing!

Shenachie

GRMcLean
Junior Member

since 2002-06-19

Posts 10

3 posted 2002-07-02 11:46 PM

Sorry, man. This sounds terrible. Have you ever had a dream that you have to scream for some horrible reason, but no voice will come out? I was just wondering if everyone experiences that.

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

4 posted 2002-07-02 11:53 PM

no robotic emotion here
as machinaries cannot speak of anguish
only what they are programmed for

so speaketh Harlan Ellison
so sayeth the soothsayer

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

5 posted 2002-07-03 12:03 PM

Thats good , That peom really relates to how i felt not to long ago......I liked it

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

6 posted 2002-07-03 12:35 PM

and I have a mouth...got an idea from reading the title of your poem and put that to words...continue your writes..welcome to Passions

liked your poem

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

7 posted 2002-07-03 01:37 AM

This was a tight poem, but I still think you should post Dark Passions!!!!!!!!!!!
LP1!!

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

8 posted 2002-07-03 10:16 PM

jge84... I read this again, and again, and again... I love it!

and GRMcLean, I've had dreams like that, too.

-Sara

You laugh at me, because i'm different.
I laugh at you, because you're all the same.

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