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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-07-02 09:20 PM



Music for Serenity

There has to be some music
To fit the mood this eve
There has to be some tune in life
That doesn’t want to leave

Where to turn to find the song
The one that makes me smile
One that feels its own belong
And carries me awhile

It has to be my very own
That fits so cleverly
And it should somehow carry
My own name, Serenity

It needs to carry fairy dust
And a bit of chime
There has to be a certain song
One that I call mine

It seems I hear a bit of it
Deep inside my heart
It only waits for a way out
To give it a fresh start

There has to be some music
That fits this soul of mine
Something for the moon dust’s glow
That welcomes in sunshine…

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-02-2002 09:24 PM).]

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ShadowRider
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1 posted 2002-07-02 09:27 PM


come listen, as friends
wind strings in breezes
where all music begins
and serenity pleases

for alone in my thoughts
alone within calm
no solitude can be bought
cocooned, safe from harm

You are the master of calm words, Sunshine
and have taken to task the peace of self.
Beautiful and ethereal,
JkF

Martie
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2 posted 2002-07-02 09:29 PM


Karilea

I hear it every day in your words...you are a song, and it is lovely!

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3 posted 2002-07-02 09:31 PM


Karilea, this flows and sounds so beautiful when read aloud, it is the only music I shall need tonight.  And yes...I could faintly hear the chimes, as if by magic.
~Hugs~
It's a

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4 posted 2002-07-02 10:09 PM


This is beautiful, Karilea. I love to listen to music.
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5 posted 2002-07-02 10:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, yes, you do have the music in your heart as we all do and you always bring such sweet magic and serenity to us all! (big hugggsssssss) This is exquisite, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-02-2002 10:18 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-07-03 12:36 PM


Karilea~

what a soulful tune you are playing....I actually closed my eyes to hear the music...beautiful my friend....
Lauren~

Emeralds from mountains
thrust towards the sky
Never revealing their depth

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7 posted 2002-07-03 12:52 PM


     and of course ~ sending a song for your heart!  So pretty!

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.


[This message has been edited by Mysteria (07-03-2002 12:54 AM).]

ecrivan
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8 posted 2002-07-03 01:18 AM


beautiful write Karilea


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9 posted 2002-07-03 01:47 AM


You've just composed a wonderful piece of soulful music, Karilea

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

ethome
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10 posted 2002-07-03 03:55 AM


There has to be some music
That fits this soul of mine
Something for the moon dust’s glow
That welcomes in sunshine…

Yep.....You got that write!

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11 posted 2002-07-03 04:05 AM


There has to be some tune in life
That doesn’t want to leave
I think it is the song that's waiting to be written!

yer lovely!


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12 posted 2002-07-03 06:59 AM


oh my gosh Karilea, this is just awesome. I truly couldnt pick a favorite line sweetie.  It is a beautiful melody you start my day with.  Hugs.  

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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13 posted 2002-07-03 07:02 AM


Yes,a beautiful  song for the early morn
Sandra

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