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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California

0 posted 2002-07-02 04:53 PM



Crystal blue, inspiration,
In soft hours, you sing to me,
Running fingers through my hair,
Convinced upon a destiny.

Passions kiss, irresistable,
Wearing paths inside my soul, we dance,
Flowers fragrance fills the air,
Something more than circumstance,
  
         Has brought us here.

My sons laughter, in your arms,
A presence that you have, he needs,
Tears form on the inside, I cry,
Such perfection as your here with me.

Midnight walks, heart felt words,
Raining down , without inhibitions,
You speak from the heart of me,
Sincerity....a sweet addition,

      To the beauty that you hold.

© Copyright 2002 amber mize - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-02 04:56 PM


You have no idea.....
your words are magical!

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2002-07-02 05:12 PM


simply beautiful....loved it.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
3 posted 2002-07-02 05:53 PM


You KNOW I'm loving your happy pen Ambs...This is what you deserve...so go slow and he will fall in love just as easily as can be! Know why? Cuz you are beautiful inside and out...that's why!!!

Keep smiling sis..and I'd like those pictures now please????

I love you!!
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



BrandeeM
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since 2002-05-01
Posts 45

4 posted 2002-07-03 11:27 AM


This is just a lovely write!!!

Hugs you...


Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
5 posted 2002-07-03 11:36 AM


so beautifully penned and such wonderful images that evoke deep emotions - thanks for a lovely poem - Paul
ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California
6 posted 2002-07-03 05:58 PM


Kris...thanks to you as always...the happy poems will riegn again!!!

Gentle Spirit...I am glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading.

Devina- Hey sissy, I know you have been waiting for this! We vote him a keeper yes???
love ya

BrandeeM- we are just moving the whole family on here arent we?? love "you" too babe.

Paul- thanks to you for reading, glad you enjoyed it.

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