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Awakening
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Awakening |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Awakening A pewter pitcher is hovering over the mountain pouring out frore that melts in the crease of the sun’s awakening Mention the last star in wink-out as it unshutters a window to see how time moves and you will briefly see a hand waiting waiting to catch the fall of night Stretching grass dew rich and now marked with footprints escapes the stretch of light briefly and is barefooted in romp with shadow waiting for warm sponge of air release wanting the crackle of hot finger rub against each delicate rib I hear the wink in the crow’s laughter and the answer from ancient words opening where someone waits to feel the heft still frozen to melt it in the crease of awakening [This message has been edited by Martie (07-02-2002 09:03 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I like this image Martie. . . as if awakening into a dream, rather than from one. . . wonderful!!  ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Sven. This has such a dream-like quaility to it Martie. Loved this one....much! ~Hugs~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's just pointless to ask you to quit writing so well, isn't it? Ah well, my luck!  |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
She writes! AND keep doing so.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A pewter pitcher is hovering over the mountain pouring out frore that melts in the crease of the sun's awakening Mention the last star in wink-out as it unshutters a window to see how time moves and you will briefly see a hand waiting waiting to catch the fall of night ====================================== Im putting my hand out to catch this poem. you write SO COOL!!!!!! Only you could paint a rain cloud into a pewter pitcher with your words. that second verse is poetic gold!! waiting to catch the fall of night how lovely is that!!  We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"Stretching grass dew rich and now marked with footprints escapes the stretch of light briefly and is barefooted in romp with shadow waiting for warm sponge of air release wanting the crackle of hot finger rub against each delicate rib" Oh you are something! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Poetess~ Who art thou ? From whence doth thou cometh ? Thee walketh through fields of word-flowers plucking them at will ... arranging them in bouquets that are fragrant with the nectar from gardens of another world~ Poetess ... who art thou ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this dreamy poem, sweet friend, may your heart always awaken to the flowers and beauty all around you and have all your dreams singing! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Stumper-Da-Bumper phoned in ... said ... "Send this one to the top !" Bumpa-Baby~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie, I like it smooth views lady |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, You grow the strangest flowers. But how beautiful they are. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - a wonderful poem the paints images on a soul - deep touches here - thanks - Paul |
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