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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-07-02 12:46 PM


I hitch a ride on memory's wings
Soaring back through time
In hopes to gaze below and see
the days when you were mine

The clouds below begin to part
I see a darkened land
The anger took away the hues
Of love within your hands

My broken heart weeps aloud
A single teardrop falls
Where's the land of love we built
That once stood proudly tall?

I turn around and return to now
With headwinds blowing strong
Touching down I realize
It's here that I belong

Our love is not forgotten
But lives within my mind
If I have to squint to see the past
My heart will soon be blind

[This message has been edited by Krishankins (07-02-2002 12:56 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-07-02 01:49 PM


Never let go of the memories Kris! Those can last forever if you let them. (hug)

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2 posted 2002-07-02 08:26 PM


I really enjoyed this. It brought back memories for me too. That's the good thing about poetry we can share our sorrows.
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3 posted 2002-07-02 08:29 PM


Wonderful memories enclosed herein Kris!
Enjoyed this piece very much!
Hey!! Love the pic!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2002-07-02 08:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, always look ahead for there is so much in store for you and I know true happiness is juat around the corner! (sigh) Keep heart, sweet friend, this is beautifully heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-07-03 11:25 AM


We both know I've done my share of squinting!!

I love the image of a city of love that you have created here Kris...

crumbled or not...sometimes memories of past stay safest...

take care you~
Tanya

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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