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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Not Ready I lay liquid not ready to pour into my day and slip away from your side for I am melted and not ready to break this moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady I'll accept that. Enjoyed |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I wish you would quit writing about this stuff. You're making me lonely  I love it still!!!!! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Your poems are just beautiful. I enjoy reading them. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
no one can capture a moment like you helen. . . wonderfully done. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
i understand this moment you speak of... cool poem! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Helen, I love your brevity. But I love your clarity more. And better yet, you write about the perfect moments. Have I told you how much I enjoy romanticism. You seem to go there often.  Thanks.Show you care to those you love...today. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Perfect...again!!! Joyce |
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