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Decaflame
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0 posted 2002-07-02 09:09 AM



Deca Returns

the eye in your silhouette
slips along, tracing fine lines
white hot

I would sear your days again
but you umbrellaed our moments
afraid of rain

there is no shading
this flame

for I burn,
ever in time
ever in shine
no matter how dappled the day

you try to secrete
thoughts from my view
but I would feel
the burn of you

and match you well
core to core
I would grasp
your love once more

I am the eye in your eye of I
come
make me the aye of your sigh

feel the burn return


© Copyright 2002 Decaflame - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-07-02 09:19 AM


Decaflame
Well that is quite an entrance. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2002-07-02 09:22 AM


Deca! Deca!!  You have been gone for far to long...
We have missed your sizzle!
~Morning hugs sweetie~

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2002-07-02 09:35 AM


got the oven on?

whew it is toasty here

ms deca...you are spankable

enjoyed it lady

Martie
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4 posted 2002-07-02 09:55 AM


Deca

Good to see you, and in lovely form!

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5 posted 2002-07-02 10:39 AM


Deca darling girl this is explosive and burning hot and I love it utterly. Your writing is so divine darling heart always your words send thrills of delight through me. This is exquisite writing, utterly utterly perfect  

  
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2002-07-02 11:16 AM


deca it is good to see you again, and I love it when this bright side of you comes out!!!

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Goodknight
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7 posted 2002-07-02 11:41 AM


very sensual images - sizzling thoughts - thanks for the very good write - Paul
Balladeer
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8 posted 2002-07-02 01:41 PM


Well, that makes a Deca dent in me!
GOlDsparklESS
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9 posted 2002-07-05 12:09 PM


i enjoy this very passionate poem..
Sven
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10 posted 2002-07-05 03:32 PM


you were gone my friend???

truly, you are a star in that sky. . . well done. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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11 posted 2002-07-05 05:32 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, we have all missed you and your enchanting words so so much, welcome back, YAY!!! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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12 posted 2002-07-05 06:48 PM


Deca Rate my poor mind with happiness!
nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2002-07-05 07:29 PM


I am the eye in your eye of I
come
make me the aye of your sigh

feel the burn return
oh how I like those lines...*s
M

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14 posted 2002-07-05 11:13 PM


And as the fires of the midwest smoulder...
Deca burns hot,  like a thousand suns...
OH YES INDEEDEEEE

Tiersdin
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15 posted 2002-07-06 08:13 AM


Bravo, Deca!

~Tierz

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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