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skying from horizon side |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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pale ocean of swans down sigh besnow me with the shimmer of your pearl as lacquer of gilt, give it lough shapes and water gloss of glaze lend to me your chalk of raven's feather your alabaster of albinic opaque let orion hunt his serpens and his giants with his gadgets and gigamaree while you dance there as my cassiopeia my virgo under velaless winds on the waves of your astronomy be my andromeda in paper chains let me melt the links that bind sigh fly my cirrus, my woolpack nimbus let me be your shepherd king of magi your keeper of dreams with scepter keys let your cloud bird children never sleep ©Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger That's a fancy way of asking for a favor. LOL Enjoyed |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
you have now left an image of wanting haunting let me see if I might comply and take you in to skies that cry more |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Beautiful... ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, thanks my friend for the review, always appreciate you Deca, bless you with your touch and the suggestion of adding to the sky Enchantress, you blush me gentle thanks lady |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Your vocabulary is amazing in this beauty. The answer, I'm sure is, certainly or when. Heat-wave waves across the valley. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
lend to me your chalk of raven's feather your alabaster of albinic opaque let orion hunt his serpens and his giants with his gadgets and gigamaree while you dance there as my cassiopeia my virgo under velaless winds on the waves of your astronomy be my andromeda in paper chains ================================ Oh yeah...I need some of what youre muse is smoking  LOLYou do know how cool this is, right?  your vocabulary and verbiage floods the mind's eye and feed the senses till they are sated. The word play, alliterations and of course, the imagery in this is most impressive DS very very cool write...the skies eyes are sighing  We wish ourselves beautiful ... and cry in the night. Its not the love you fear ... but the fall from the height. E. McCain [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-02-2002 12:31 PM).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
while you dance there as my cassiopeia my virgo under velaless winds on the waves of your astronomy be my andromeda in paper chains Sigh~ sorry..that's it. I am wordless. Touched..but wordless. Me |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
had to keep grabbing so this one would not go over my head...and I hold it now...*sigh* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie...seems those clouds are coming from your direction...but they are lovely, thanks ms JM...thanks Janet, just got all messed up in the sky and clouds...like frosting a cake with seems it just kept oozing out...didn't smoke it ..but the brownies were really special this time..(grin) Dear Me..thanks Regina, wanna sit down for a bit til you get some words back? Thanks for the read and reply hon, is a pleasure to give you some and take some too (words) PS, thanks for the sigh and the grabs,,that darn sky is over our head a lot huh? grin I appreciate you |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may the constellations always shine in your loves skies and guide you to infinity and beyond! (big hugggssssss) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such abeautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
enjoyed the walk my friend...twice... jwesley |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, bless you sir, thanks J wes, most humble thanks to you |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'let me melt the links that bind sigh fly my cirrus, my woolpack nimbus let me be your shepherd king of magi your keeper of dreams with scepter keys' Ohhh, yeah, now these are some lines of poetry...your imagery just amazes me sometimes...okay, all the time...great write! sp    I've been down this road forever, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Your metaphorical pen is just smoking in this piece DS I enjoyed the sail through the atmosphere and the universe.....Excellent! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
be my andromeda in paper chains let me melt the links that bind You do have a way with metaphor... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
snowpants, thaks so much for your reads and comments ethome, a pleasure to have your reviews, thanks so much ms sunshine, you are such a pleasure to have visits from, slow hugs to you lady friend |
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