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The River of Time
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The River of Time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The River of Time Poling down the river of time I see the shore the sky is lime Each night an end, each day a start And I the artist of this art. My arms grow weary of the strain And dreary of the daily drain The river turns from slow to speed And I am swamped with daily need When currents run around the bend I watch each movement till the end When rivers run is straight of lease I dream about an inner peace. Today I wile in different lure The breeze has opened up a door My mind and hand have grasped a goal The yearnings of a starving soul The floors a mass of flowers awe And I am poling straight for shore. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... so I sit and watch the artist paint finding colors leaves me faint for I would have the artist more by words his thoughts to explore but he only smiles then leaves a line in color then, my thoughts entwined... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, You are shining bright this morning.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And what an creative artist you are Sy! This is truly beautiful! ~Morning Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When currents run around the bend I watch each movement till the end When rivers run is straight of lease I dream about an inner peace. Today I wile in different lure The breeze has opened up a door My mind and hand have grasped a goal The yearnings of a starving soul The floors a mass of flowers awe And I am poling straight for shore. ============================== It sounds to me ... like we are are sailing towards shores of serenity There we will dock in ports of harmony ... and sip the serene of raspberry tea. It works for me...does it work for thee? Let me know with a wink of the *winkiewinkie*  *L*  ps: I see the shore the sky is lime The floors a mass of flowers awe those will be the coolest lines I'll read today |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thanks for the Email, I just sent you an answer. Your favor is full of raspberry flavor and I hope the pot is full. Love Ya Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Good morning and thank you sweet enchantress. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The floors a mass of flowers awe And I am poling straight for shore. Loved this! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
The river is born in the sky The silent snow is it's seed In the season of the sun It's crystal blood runs Over the sun gathering into itself Godspeed It flows over dams and under bridges We pour honey and oil and sewage Steel and dust and paper into it Spent and sullied Slowly it goes down To be lost in the sea.. A river of time Starts out so fine Ends in pollution Most human of crimes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Toe, Why bring up the truth, I prefer the flowers. Martie, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and bringer of the mornings light Your writing is so moving so beautiful that I’m left awed not knowing what to say. Absolutely excellent writing and you know I love this utterly utterly utterly Your writing is a gift so rare and precious a ray of loves light to shine through when the night seems to stay too long. I definitely needed this caress of my soul. I’m always telling you how special your writing is, on grey and cloudy days you bring a poem of such brilliance I’m overlaid with its reflected sheen. Thank you for the vision and the delight   Love and warm stuff As always Slushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, THe sun does come up in the east. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (07-02-2002 12:19 PM).] |
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Krissy Senior Member
since 2002-02-22
Posts 556kent England |
Seymour hi there again your poem has reached inside and enlightened me. On the days when I can’t fit in a visit to mum’s I have her read me your poems and any ones she thinks are especially good. Of course that means I get to hear her favourite poets, but she has so many that I share that I forgive her Your poems are always welcome they life my mood no matter how trying the day has been. You are a very good writer, and I know I say it often but it is perfectly true. This is well written with perfect rhyme and flows as the stream of the river Love and warm stuff As always Krissy And while thy willing soul transpiers |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
I have suddenly developed a craving for a lime soda float. Ah by the way the artists art work of poetry was right on today, this was indeed exqusite. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krissy, Thank you dear always enjoy your comments. Gemini, Enjoyed your reply, thank you. |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
ding ding ding We have a winner, here, folks! The slowing down of life is bitter medicine, Sey, young friend, but with it comes the taste for knowing what is enjoyable. great stuff, amigo! jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you are a fabulous artist and always contribute such pizazz to the fresco of this board! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ShadowRider Nice reply, thank you Jeff. Noah, Can always count on you for a good comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Sometimes all it takes is the right goal... and weariness vanishes as anticipation surges through us. *S* This is beautiful, Seymour... *S* I love Toe's response, too... we should all take better care... lest the shores we finally reach be strewn with reeking garbage. *S* Two excellent poems... a definite treat for this gal. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, I'll give you a when I see you. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for a wonderful trip on the river if time - so well written and wonderful images painted - thanks - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Thank you for your time and comment. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
SY~ I knew I would love this just from the title....what a wonderful morning read... Lauren~ Emeralds from mountains |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lauren, And the happiest of mornings to you. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
The rapids and rocks make the river of time intresting. paladin |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
paladin I hope so, it's a one way trip. LOL |
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