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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I am the dark stones that walk soft footed on beige sides of brine bed I wear sun sway tattoos on my glisten skin the black of me is comely and you touch with your eyes you climb me with bare feet and settle down over my uprightness you are mist of morning then I am the hunger of night mouth dry we make whisper songs and our love is forbidden when sun sons come on dawn wagons ©Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rock river songs... you must be traveling... the imagery is wonderful... |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I wear sun sway tattoos on my glisten skin You sway the sun my way every morning..I believe you. Gorgeous piece.. Sincerely, Reg |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hi ms sunshine.. more of the oregon coast when the juneteen days are sun touched thanks ms coffee friend |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Regina, a pleasure to tan your mind with my thoughts I enjoy the mornings under your eyes thanks babe |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Ooooohhhhh...the entire poem is fabulous but I especially love the final line, it makes it seem like each new day brings new promises and you ship them off as imports into your wildest dreams! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"I wear sun sway tatoos on my glisten skin" Could that line be any cooler?!! Your imagery and tone is amazing! Never stop writing, you have a unique gift. I wish that I could see the world the way you do, you give it such charm and depth. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
noah, thanks my friend ms mel, thanks for your sweet words, you bless me much |
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GOlDsparklESS Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 428central nj |
you are mist of morning then I am the hunger of night mouth dry we make whisper songs and our love is forbidden wow |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this is...whats the word? SPELLBINDING |
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