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My Dear, I Hurt
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My Dear, I Hurt |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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You said you would but you didn't If you don't care anymore just tell me I'll pick up the pieces of my broken heart and move on with my life. The time that I needed you most you weren't there You said you would but you weren't. I don't understand why you broke one single, tiny promise What's the big deal about writing? Especially when I need you so much. Maybe I'll just forget it and not believe when you say you will. Maybe I'll just shut you out like you seem to want me to... But I dont' want to I just want to love you I just want you to be there for me like you say you are I let you in, and all I wanted was to know you care(d?) I guess this is written to say the things I couldn't say nicely In anything else but a poem. I've been hurt, and I hope that you realise why My lines do not rhyme, my flow is impossible... But, my dear, I hurt. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sometimes the best poetry is that which just FLOWS from your heart. This is that kind of poem. I enjoyed it...hope this pain goes away soon. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh, I can feel your hurt. I do hope it goes away soon... In the meantime, write it out. Is that a new pic? Love it!! ~Hugs~ |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
*hugs* I'll talk to you tonight, Rhonda. ~Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Hang in there, it will get better....your heart shows....wishing much peace... Lauren~ Emeralds from mountains |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
I'm so sad for your owie, but it has caused you a great "release" of a write. Peace to you. ~SM |
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