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Larry C
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0 posted 2002-07-01 11:48 PM



Powerful Smile
By Larry Chadwick


He did it with a smile that I misunderstood,
I gave to him my trust because I thought I could.
But I misread the smile upon his powerful face,
And mistakenly I found my confidence was misplaced.

My error nearly proved to me to be fatal,
I would have reclaimed my choice had I been able.
So when a lion shows his teeth to you,
Don’t assume that he is smiling too.

July 1, 2002


Show you care to those you love...today.

© Copyright 2002 Larry Chadwick - All Rights Reserved
Bridget Shenachie
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1 posted 2002-07-01 11:56 PM


No doubt, the cat was glad to see you.  Probably thought you were lunch.

Fun write, Larry.  Note to self--Not everyone who smiles has my best interests at heart.

Shenachie

SmartChick
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2 posted 2002-07-02 12:16 PM


You have to watch out for those smiles.
Duncan
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3 posted 2002-07-02 01:30 AM


Damn, I understand this much too well!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Keith Morgan
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4 posted 2002-07-02 01:32 AM


no truer words have ever been spoken. your words come to life and take the face of reality.  thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Write from the soul and the words will flow

Larry C
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5 posted 2002-07-02 01:39 AM


The last two lines are a variation on an African saying I heard today on the radio.

Shenachie,
Boy ain't that the truth! And thanks.

Sue,
Yup...ya' do! Thanks.

Duncan,
That explains a lot! And thanks.

Keith,
Thanks. And nice to see another Arizonan in here. Glad to meet you and I'll look for your work. Welcome, I hope you like it here as much as me.

Show you care to those you love...today.

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 2002-07-02 03:02 AM


Looks can be deceiving, it's what lies in the heart that matters most...

Nice writing Larry~

mycafe
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7 posted 2002-07-02 04:38 AM


Thanks for this great reminder, Larry.  Sometimes we have to learn not to trust too soon.  Nice write and fun read !

marie@mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2002-07-02 04:56 AM


I suppose this would pertain to a shark also...James
Larry C
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9 posted 2002-07-02 09:48 PM


Lori,
Indeed it is. Thanks.

Marie,
Welcome to Passions. Hope you like it here. And thanks a bunch.

James,
Do sharks smile? Silly guy. Thanks.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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