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Help me Make it through the Night
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Help me Make it through the Night |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Help me make it through the night Help me face another dawn For my faith is out of sight And my courage nearly gone Hold me in your loving arms While I have no strength to fight Hold me here with all your charms Help me make it through the night Take my tears and wipe away All the grief I have to bear If you want for me to stay Give me courage for my fear I am weak but you are strong And my battle is my plight Give me strength to carry on Till the night becomes the light In the daylight I can breathe And I know that I can fight All I need is time to grieve Help me make it through the night All I need is time to grieve If I make it through the night Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh Keth, this is so poignant but so very beautifuly done. Keep the faith hon, and sending hugs to you. Wonderful... Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Kethry. ~Hugs~ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my heart and keeper of dreams designs, have you any idea how spectacular this poem is? No probably not since you entirely lack all conceit, then let me tell you darling heart it is awesome, and no I am not just saying that. Naturally the rhythm is perfect and the flow is utterly utterly spot on. Your writing is never less than perfect sometimes however even I am amazed at the beauty you mange to weave through your words. This is gorgeous, and IWIHWT, so very very much. Perfect writing darling heart absolutely perfect  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
This is so beautiful and heartfelt...I love it Tai |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
"All I need is time to grieve If I make it through the night" Very powerful emotions penned. A wonderful read! *mycafe* Keep counting your blessings |
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my3monkeytoes Member
since 2002-05-11
Posts 152In the Carolina Breeze |
Kethry~ Did you write this for moi? Sure feels like it. Just the thing I needed to read tonight. I'm keeping this one...mind if I post it within daily sight for a while? I really like this. Makes me think this would be a good prayer in times of uncertainty and pain. Mmmm Mmmm good one! ~SM [This message has been edited by my3monkeytoes (07-09-2002 09:35 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Kethry, we can all feel the sadness and angst in your words, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I too wish for stillness to come and love and faith to guide you always! (sigh) My thoughts and prayers are with you, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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