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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-07-01 09:15 PM



Your mouth is but a flower
these two lips long to kiss

Your hands are but the hours
I long to spend like this

Your legs are trembling but for naught

Your mouth, your hands-- I'm caught

© Copyright 2002 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
RosePetal
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1 posted 2002-07-01 11:00 PM


hey walt! Been a while since I've read you.
Very interesting poem, you left me wanting more. enjoyed it my friend.

devina
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2 posted 2002-07-01 11:10 PM


Ohhh...getting mushy on me...you know I appreciate that Walter!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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3 posted 2002-07-02 04:34 PM


walty. . . this is perfect. . .

I love it. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-07-02 08:21 PM


You shouldn't be staring!!! LOL Enjoyed this.
the_loner_23
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5 posted 2002-07-08 12:16 PM


I love this

Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-07-08 12:28 PM


wayoutwalt
Clever, enjoyed the read.

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