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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2002-07-01 08:23 PM

Love me in the daylight
with the sun soft upon my face
where darkness doesnt hide your eyes
and I can see you're really loving me.

Love me in dawns first flush
when sleep gently tugs your mind
the wind whispering in the trees and chimes
and I can see you're really loving me.

Love me in the evenings fade
when the birds start settling for the night
and the sky glows soft rose and indigo
and I can see you're really loving me.

Then love me in nights deepest hour
when the moon is just a memory
and even the cicadas have ceased to sing
because I'll know you're really loving me.

cherrypoptart
Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 109
state of wordthiness

1 posted 2002-07-01 08:31 PM

This is very romantic Paula.........I love all the scenes!

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2002-07-01 08:47 PM

Paula darling sister of my heart oh my word HOW I HAVE MISSED YOU welcome kiss from me to you your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your writing in this is exquisite, I love it utterly utterly. Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times. I’m deeply touched by these words of finest flow that trickle through this delight with pure wonder. Obviously they came from within a mind of sparkling dreams Absolutely beautiful writing darling I love the thought of you in this. Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly

You have been away far too long, come back more often you hear, this place isn’t over run with so many brilliant poets that we can afford to lose one as wonderful as you. My sister, who shines like a star don’t take your light away now, we need you.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-07-02 05:02 AM

Yes love should continue...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2002-07-02 06:35 AM

Paula, very nice write. Yes, to be loved anytime, anywhere.....absolutely is beautiful.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2002-07-02 07:41 AM

True love- 24/7. I enjoyed the read.

Melton

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

6 posted 2002-07-02 07:48 AM

I enjoyed reading this Paula!

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

7 posted 2002-07-02 07:58 AM

Ya just can't keep a poet down for long can ya?

So good to see you writing Paula!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets. ~Arthur Miller

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

8 posted 2002-07-02 04:24 PM

ahhh. . . now, this is much better. . . you know me, I love total unapologetic romance. . .

great job Paula. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2002-07-02 04:49 PM

Paula, this is so nice.

It's great to see you posting again.

Gemini
Senior Member

since 1999-12-15

Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA

10 posted 2002-07-02 06:46 PM

So tender and sweet, very lovely poem.

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