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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2002-07-01 07:29 PM


A,meri
     can we dance?

Claiming in
  depend ants

A,meri
     do we sing?

in sin
       See-Eerily

through fogs of

red
              whites

and blue

proud to be  
night meri
   can
you spare some change?

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (07-01-2002 07:39 PM).]

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devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
1 posted 2002-07-01 08:43 PM


Clever write Walter...

coulda swore I saw you floating round here!!! Good to see you!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



cherrypoptart
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since 2002-06-09
Posts 109
state of wordthiness
2 posted 2002-07-01 08:55 PM


If you can't get it there I can spare some.
....Love the play on words.......Just up a way out poetic alley!

[This message has been edited by cherrypoptart (07-01-2002 08:56 PM).]

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-08 12:16 PM


Very cool write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

4 posted 2002-07-08 12:28 PM



Good write, Walt...
sorry I missed it the first time around....

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