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0 posted 2002-07-01 04:21 PM


Opening Up


Cupid eyes stare wantonly with cheesy smiles,
hoping against hope for a taste, a sip of who I am.
Such foolishness!
I’m nothing more than a man like all the rest, lusting for what is not my own,
drinking of bitter days,
eating my own failures over and over...
regurgitating the foul flavor.

I fight, always, always...
I refuse to lose, though often I have,
but not as often as most,
for I don’t fight on knees,
half-heartedly.
I fight, baring teeth,
ready to chew my enemy
and then spit him out.

My childhood was broken
and fate would break the man
if it could.  Yeah, IF it could!
No, I can’t be broken.

You grope, grasping blindly
for hope.
I have no need to grasp,
for it is always within reach.
It is part of who I am.
Peace never leaves me.

A flower withers,
giving up petals,
gasping its last breath.
I gather them, feel their
failing health, feel my own.
Pressed against cheek
I absorb the warmth of their life,
inhale the fragrance of their being.
They live beyond themselves.

I fear, fear.  
I stomp it to death
whenever I see it crawling,
trying to run up my leg.
Yes, true, like a roach,
disgusting!  
I grind it underfoot
because I must.



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1 posted 2002-07-01 04:25 PM


for I don’t fight on knees,
half-heartedly.
I fight, baring teeth,
ready to chew my enemy
and then spit him out.


smiling and nodding with familiar understanding--YES!!!!

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2 posted 2002-07-01 05:19 PM


I fear, fear.  
I stomp it to death
whenever I see it crawling,
trying to run up my leg.
Yes, true, like a roach,
disgusting!  
I grind it underfoot
because I must.
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Yes you do!!  Well you really did open up here Michael..
giving us insight into how you think and feel.  
Enjoyed seeing this side of you,
and love the style of this piece.
~Hugs & Smiles~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Martie
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3 posted 2002-07-01 05:21 PM


Michael

Strong words, my friend.  Life is not always easy, fighting fear and keeping hope alive are good things to do....and keep on smelling those flowers!

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4 posted 2002-07-01 05:26 PM


Don't stop scrappin'.
I like the positive attitude in this!
Wonderfully done here!

Krishankins

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5 posted 2002-07-01 10:55 PM


Michael,

    I like this

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2002-07-02 06:40 AM



A word letting...
thoughts telling...
good write!

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7 posted 2002-07-03 12:50 PM




(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are a true angel and you always reach out to us all with arms wide open! (sigh) Always squish those thoughts that make you feel sad and always plant what makes you happy, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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